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大作文原题

「题目分析」

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People spend a large amount of time and money on the protection of wild animals. Some people argue that they should be spent on human populations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

题目类型：动物保护类

提问方式：agree or disagree议论文 , 该题目呈现了两种观点，第一种是人们花大量时间和金钱保护动物，第二种是人们应该把大量时间和金钱花在人类发展上。问同意哪种观点。观点类的议论文需要我们在开头段表达出自己的立场。

整体分段及结构：

Introduction: 交代背景内容，并提出自己的立场

Body1: 承认第二个观点的合理性即金钱应当作用在human population的用途

Body2: 此段为驳论段，主要论证保护动物是更为重要的

Conclusion: 简单地总结一下并再次表明自己的观点

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范文及分析

「逐段详解」

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Some people hold a positive attitude towards protecting wild animals and there are others argue that the government should spend more money on human beings. Although humans development is important, I would be convinced that we still have to emphasize on the protection of bio-diversity.

Introduction 首先引入话题内容，紧接着是表明自己的立场态度。

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It is widely recognized that human beings are superior to animals, thus many people believed money should be devoted into human activities like health care and education which may foster the development of human societies. For example, as the United Nations reported, billions of people in remote areas may even lack the access to clean drinking water. As a result, thousands of children are killed by diseases every year. If more budget was used for establishing sanitation service, this problem will to some extent alleviated.

此段先进行让步分析，承认政府应该将钱投入到健康或者教育这种与人类息息相关的事物中去。如今世界上有几亿人口甚至没有获得干净水资源的途径，所以很多的孩子由于疾病死去。但如果更多的预算能用来建造健康服务，问题的严重性会大大减少。

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However, we can not only focus on solving human beings problems and neglect the crucial roles that animals play in our human civilizations. Wild animals can help us maintain the balance between ecosystem and human life. For instance, if large species of birds feed on insects and rats are dying out, the farmland will be destroyed greatly for its vulnerability and the farmers who rely on these crops will lose a source of income. With no sufficient food, human beings will eventually suffer from starvation. What is more, the reason that animals are in danger is all due to human actions which aimed to promote economical development. Therefore, we should be aware of the significance of protecting wild species and take actions to prevent the extinction happening.

第3段主要表述自己观点。然而，我们不能忽视野生动物也对人类的生存有着极大的影响。他们能够帮助维持人与自然的关系平衡。比如一些以昆虫或老鼠为生的鸟类大量灭亡将会意味着庄稼大面积的破坏，与此同时农民会失去一项经济来源，人类也会面临挨饿的危机。动物的灭亡会带来一系列对人类生活的威胁，所以我们应当重视起来对于动物的保护。

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To conclude, it is true that human benefits are always given the top priority, while the government and citizens should still attach much importance to protect wildlife to maintain the ecological environment.

总结段再简单重申一下观点及保护动物的重要性。